检查一下英语演讲稿有没有语法错误I hope our study will be more funnyIn Chinese class,you will always see such a scene.A teacher,holding chalk,facing the blackboard,ever writes a lot of words.The students holding pens,look at the blackb

检查一下英语演讲稿有没有语法错误I hope our study will be more funnyIn Chinese class,you will always see such a scene.A teacher,holding chalk,facing the blackboard,ever writes a lot of words.The students holding pens,look at the blackb
检查一下英语演讲稿有没有语法错误
I hope our study will be more funny
In Chinese class,you will always see such a scene.A teacher,holding chalk,facing the blackboard,ever writes a lot of words.The students holding pens,look at the blackboard,but the teacher is still endless to speak.Whatever the subject,the teacher is always the protagonist of the classroom,students have only blindly accepted.After the lesson,the students take notes and exercise books will be hold on their hands at all.The final scores only depends in your memory.
We increasingly can not accept this approach to learning,we will become a learning machine.We learn a great deal of knowledge,but do not know how to use it in our lives; we are good at listening; but not good at expressing our views; we can study well,but we can’t live very well.
So I hope that our class would be a stage of exchanging our ideas.Teachers may not give the lesson alone and could communicate with students.Besides,I hope that teachers could also take part in activities.The classmates can compete with each other and get along well with each other.I expect that our school life would have more fun and make everyone enjoy the class.That is my hope.
请检查一下语法,并纠正,好的追分,今天!
请大家把修改后的那一段或那一句再粘贴一变，

检查一下英语演讲稿有没有语法错误I hope our study will be more funnyIn Chinese class,you will always see such a scene.A teacher,holding chalk,facing the blackboard,ever writes a lot of words.The students holding pens,look at the blackb
改动如下:
I hope our study will be more funny.
In Chinese classes, you will always see such a scene:A teacher, holding a chalk, facing the blackboard, is busy writing down a lot of words. His or her students are holding pens, gazing at the blackboard, but the teacher is still endlessly talking. Whatever the subject, the teacher is always the protagonist of the classroom, and students can only blindly accept.Students take notes during class and exercise books still held in their hands after class. However,the examination only test our memory.
We can't accept this way oflearning.We fear we will become learning machines.Although we learn plent of knowledge,we do not know how to use it in our lives; we are good at listening,but are unable to express our views; we can study well, but we can’t live very well.
Therefore I hope our class will be a stage of exchanging our ideas. Teachers not only give the lesson but also communicate with students. Furthermore, I hope teachers could also take part in our school activities so that students can compete with each other and get along well with each other. I expect that our school life will be more fun and everyone can enjoy the class.
不知道你现在是什么年龄,所以按初中一般标准改的.如果需要,也可以给你往TOEFL,IELTS和SAT上靠.文章中有不少Chinglish,你可以多看看外国原著.

第一句话，逗号不能连接两句话，需要加连词。
第二句话几个动词需要采取相同并列格式。
第三句话同第二句。