女神的作业.短文在下.句型和单词都有错误.Dear Sir or MadamI am very interested in your products after I visited your stand at the Paris trade exhibition last month I would be grateful if you could send me your catalogue for the comple

女神的作业.短文在下.句型和单词都有错误.Dear Sir or MadamI am very interested in your products after I visited your stand at the Paris trade exhibition last month I would be grateful if you could send me your catalogue for the comple
女神的作业.短文在下.句型和单词都有错误.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am very interested in your products after I visited your stand at the Paris trade exhibition last month
I would be grateful if you could send me your catalogue for the complete range of this kind of product as well as your price list
Besides stainless steel cutlery I also request a quotation for mild steel C.I.F.let me know your terms of payment and the time required for delivery after you receive the order if terms and delivery time are satisfactory we will place regular orders you faithful
Linda Wang

女神的作业.短文在下.句型和单词都有错误.Dear Sir or MadamI am very interested in your products after I visited your stand at the Paris trade exhibition last month I would be grateful if you could send me your catalogue for the comple
Dear Sir or Madam(,)
I am very interested in your products after I (have) visited your stand at the Paris trade exhibition last month(.)
I would be (most)grateful if you could send me your catalogue for the complete range of this kind of product as well as your price list(.)
Besides stainless steel cutlery I also request a quotation for mild steel C.I.F.(Please)let me know your terms of payment and the time required for delivery after you (have)receive(received) the order(.) if(If) terms and delivery time are satisfactory(,) we will place regular orders(.)
you faithful(Yours Faithfully,)
Linda Wang
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亲爱的先生/女士，
上个月在巴黎贸易展参观了你们的摊位后，我对你们的产品很感兴趣。
如果你们能发给我你们完整的产品样本和报价单，我将非常感激。
除了不锈钢刀叉，我还要中碳钢刀叉的到岸价。请告诉我你们的付款方式以及交货期。
如果条款和交期合适，我会定期下单。
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亲爱的先生/女士，
上个月在巴黎贸易展参观了你们的摊位后，我对你们的产品很感兴趣。
如果你们能发给我你们完整的产品样本和报价单，我将非常感激。
除了不锈钢刀叉，我还要中碳钢刀叉的到岸价。请告诉我你们的付款方式以及交货期。
如果条款和交期合适，我会定期下单。
忠诚的
王琳达

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