作业帮帮我看看我写的英语句子有语法错吗?Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.真心希望能指出我为什么那样写是错的，犯了什么语法
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帮我看看我写的英语句子有语法错吗?Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.真心希望能指出我为什么那样写是错的，犯了什么语法
帮我看看我写的英语句子有语法错吗?
Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.
真心希望能指出我为什么那样写是错的，犯了什么语法错误
帮我看看我写的英语句子有语法错吗?Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.真心希望能指出我为什么那样写是错的，犯了什么语法
designed 和 released是过去分词；ranking 是现在分词 都是非谓语动词,单独不作谓语.句子缺少谓语
Angry Birds,( was ) designed by Jackke Lisalo and released ( in )December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.
Or
Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released in December,2009,ranks the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.
ranking the first ... 语法不对。
建议这样改（并简洁化）：
Angry Birds, designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December, 2009, ranks as Apple's most popular game.
这个句子没有谓语
Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December,2009,is ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.