请教高手帮我检查一下这份英文简历是否可以?应聘电子方面工作的外企,personal date Name:FG Gender:Male Birthdate:Feb.1982 Height:172mmMobile:139x-xxx-xxx E-mail:xxxxx@yahoo.com.cnMajor:The electrical engineering automationAd

请教高手帮我检查一下这份英文简历是否可以?应聘电子方面工作的外企,personal date Name:FG Gender:Male Birthdate:Feb.1982 Height:172mmMobile:139x-xxx-xxx E-mail:xxxxx@yahoo.com.cnMajor:The electrical engineering automationAd
请教高手帮我检查一下这份英文简历是否可以?应聘电子方面工作的外企,
personal date
Name:FG Gender:Male
Birthdate:Feb.1982 Height:172mm
Mobile:139x-xxx-xxx E-mail:xxxxx@yahoo.com.cn
Major:The electrical engineering automation
Address:9,xx street,xx district,Changchun,130021,China
Job objective
In the new work environment,learning techniques,growth experience,improve their contact areas of business ability,can contribute to the company's future.
work experience
2006-2010 In xx electronic technology research institute,The electronic and information engineering office.07,08,09 Three consecutive years was voted unit outstanding worker.Mainly engaged in engineering design,Equipment installation and commissioning.
For example:
1.China xx company jilin branch of electronic monitoring and security guard project
2.Jilin xx company perimeter electronic monitoring project
3.Jilin xx examination test electronic search system engineering
And so on
education
2002-2006 jilin xx College,Information engineering department,Electrical engineering or automation professional.B.E.
Academic main courses
Basic of Digital Electronic Techniqul
Basic Analog Electronics
Principle of Microcomputer
PLC Programmable Controller Foundation
English Skills
Have a good command of both spoken and written English .Past CET-4.
Other Skills
Auto CAD drawing,office software Word,excel
Hobbies/Interests
Badminton,Hiking movement.

请教高手帮我检查一下这份英文简历是否可以?应聘电子方面工作的外企,personal date Name:FG Gender:Male Birthdate:Feb.1982 Height:172mmMobile:139x-xxx-xxx E-mail:xxxxx@yahoo.com.cnMajor:The electrical engineering automationAd
基本没什么问题吧,Job objective 好像写的简略了点哦
该交代的都交代了
几个小错误
身高 Height:172mm 太诡异了吧?
Past CET-4.应该是passed吧?
Basic of Digital Electronic Techniqul 最后一个词拼写错误吧?
professional.B.E.BE对应的缩写是什么呢?貌似我知道的只有bachelor of education（economic）教育或者经济学士,工学的不知道能不能用BE
就这样,个人感觉,不一定对的

在Job objective里面对公司的贡献 应该在具体一点吧 说的自己很菜的样子就不好了吧。 And so on 就不用了吧 个人意见哦。