谁帮忙看看这几句英文有什么语法错误吗?原文如下：I got so excited to know that an interview will be arranged for me several days later,even that is not the job offer itself.Thank you for your inform.The phone number on my C.V.(+8

谁帮忙看看这几句英文有什么语法错误吗?原文如下：I got so excited to know that an interview will be arranged for me several days later,even that is not the job offer itself.Thank you for your inform.The phone number on my C.V.(+8
谁帮忙看看这几句英文有什么语法错误吗?
原文如下：
I got so excited to know that an interview will be arranged for me several days later,even that is not the job offer itself.Thank you for your inform.
The phone number on my C.V.(+86-XXX-XXX-XXX) is available all the time,besides,there is another cell phone number:+86-139XXXXXXXX.You can contact me via both of them.
I'll cherish this opportunity of interview and make ready for it.Honestly,I am eager to join your team as soon as possible.
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谁帮忙看看这几句英文有什么语法错误吗?原文如下：I got so excited to know that an interview will be arranged for me several days later,even that is not the job offer itself.Thank you for your inform.The phone number on my C.V.(+8
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这个语法错误挺多的，很多词也用的不对，没法改阿

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i am so glad to hear that i was arranged to get this interview in a few days, although i know it does not means i can get the offer to this job, but still i fell so exciting. thanks for your...

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i am so glad to hear that i was arranged to get this interview in a few days, although i know it does not means i can get the offer to this job, but still i fell so exciting. thanks for your inform.
the tel. in my resume is still available now, but you can also use another tel. number to contact with me(139xxxxxxxx) if any chances , like the former number is busy in line or can not reach.
certainly, i will cherish this opportunity of job interview. to be honest, i am eagerly to join in your team as soon as possible.

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