英语高手来帮我看看我的作文有什么问题么?有错误的帮我改一下,主要是帮我改一下时态,用词不当什么的!谢谢了Attend my brother’s weddingMay day this year, I want to Heilongjiang province to attend my brother

英语高手来帮我看看我的作文有什么问题么?有错误的帮我改一下,主要是帮我改一下时态,用词不当什么的!谢谢了Attend my brother’s weddingMay day this year, I want to Heilongjiang province to attend my brother
英语高手来帮我看看我的作文有什么问题么?
有错误的帮我改一下,主要是帮我改一下时态,用词不当什么的!谢谢了
Attend my brother’s wedding
May day this year, I want to Heilongjiang province to attend my brother’s wedding. We go by train, because I do not travel long time ,so I’m very happy. Along the way I look at the scenery. Sometime the train can travel long distances to see some village. To brother’s home spent night time. Where is the black earth, the sky is very blue, the water is salty. Wedding day, I shot a lot of photos. Sister-in-law is very beautiful. We also went to the playground .Happy time always flies. We stayed there for fore days. I like here.

英语高手来帮我看看我的作文有什么问题么?有错误的帮我改一下,主要是帮我改一下时态,用词不当什么的!谢谢了Attend my brother’s weddingMay day this year, I want to Heilongjiang province to attend my brother
Attend my brother’s wedding
May this year,I went to Heilongjiang province to attend my brother’s wedding.We went there by train,as it is not a long time travel,so I was very happy.Along the way I looked at the scenery.Sometime the train may travel long distance,we could see some villages.In my brother’s home I stayed for one night.Where it is the black earth,the sky is very blue,and the water is salty.On the wedding day,I took a lot of photos.Sister-in-law is very beautiful.We also went to the playground.Happy time always flies.We stayed there for four days.I like there.

In May this year，I went to Heilongjiang Province to attend my brother's wedding. We went there by train.Because I haven't traveled for a long time,so I was very happy.On the way I look at the scenery....

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In May this year，I went to Heilongjiang Province to attend my brother's wedding. We went there by train.Because I haven't traveled for a long time,so I was very happy.On the way I look at the scenery.there are some village from distance to distance.It took me nine hours to get to my brother'home.the soil is black,the sky is blue,the water is sweet.I took a lot of photos on wedding day.Sister in-law is very beautiful.we also went to the playground.happy time is always short.we stayed there four days.I like there very much.
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