我给老外写信 英语高手看看行不一个外国公司给我邮寄了封信,但我没有接收到好象丢失了,所以我想让他再邮寄一次,以前的地址是正确的,过去我给他们邮寄过6个单独的写了自己地址小字条.

我给老外写信 英语高手看看行不一个外国公司给我邮寄了封信,但我没有接收到好象丢失了,所以我想让他再邮寄一次,以前的地址是正确的,过去我给他们邮寄过6个单独的写了自己地址小字条.
我给老外写信 英语高手看看行不
一个外国公司给我邮寄了封信,但我没有接收到好象丢失了,所以我想让他再邮寄一次,以前的地址是正确的,过去我给他们邮寄过6个单独的写了自己地址小字条.
Dear Sir or Madam
I fail to receive your mail with the additional documents on the 05January2009.Please send it again.The address must be right.The address is on the six self-addressed mailing labels .Think you.
Yours sincerely
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我给老外写信 英语高手看看行不一个外国公司给我邮寄了封信,但我没有接收到好象丢失了,所以我想让他再邮寄一次,以前的地址是正确的,过去我给他们邮寄过6个单独的写了自己地址小字条.
你看这样写会不会更好
I haven't received your mail till now,perhaps it was lost I think. Could you please send me again under the address I prepared for you before.
Thanks and best regards,

The address must be right. 改成 The address must be written correctly
Think you. 改 Thank you very much.
fail to receive 改成 Did not received
Please send it again. 改成 Please send it to me again.

你日期的写法是错的.我是英语专业的
Dear Friend,
I do not receive your mail with the additional documents on January 5th ,2009.Would you please send it to me again? The address must be written correctly .The ...

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你日期的写法是错的.我是英语专业的
Dear Friend,
I do not receive your mail with the additional documents on January 5th ,2009.Would you please send it to me again? The address must be written correctly .The address is on the six self-addressed mailing labels .Thank you very much.
Yours sincerely (因为你是拜托对方 所以要委婉点)

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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am sorry that I still have not received your mail with attachment which you have sent it on Jan 5th，2009.Could you send it to me again? Maybe you have got a wrong address, so I think that you need to examine my address. There are six self-addressed mailling labels. Thank you.
Your sincerely,

I have not received your mail with the additional documents that you sent on January 5, 2009. I am wondering if it has been lost in the mailing process. Could you do me a favor to send it again? My address is on the six mailing labels I sent to you a while ago. Thank you very much.
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