帮忙翻译几句话,修改一下我的也可以.汉译英.1..我有2个故事想要和大家分享.第一个故事是关于一段医生与病人之间的对话,这个故事是这样的,一个病人去看医生.2.但是为什么我感觉这么冷呢

帮忙翻译几句话,修改一下我的也可以.汉译英.1..我有2个故事想要和大家分享.第一个故事是关于一段医生与病人之间的对话,这个故事是这样的,一个病人去看医生.2.但是为什么我感觉这么冷呢
帮忙翻译几句话,修改一下我的也可以.汉译英.
1..我有2个故事想要和大家分享.第一个故事是关于一段医生与病人之间的对话,这个故事是这样的,一个病人去看医生.
2.但是为什么我感觉这么冷呢?
1Here aare two storys I'd like to share with you.First story is about a communicate of patient and doctor.One day,A patient went to see a doctor.
2.But why am i feeling so cold.
以上是我自己的,但总觉得有点问题.
比如看医生有没有a这个字.
还有就是感觉很冷这个翻译,要问句.
第一个故事是关于一段医生与病人之间的对话,这个怎么译?
如果你认为你的比较的我好,请将你的给我.
不胜感激.

帮忙翻译几句话,修改一下我的也可以.汉译英.1..我有2个故事想要和大家分享.第一个故事是关于一段医生与病人之间的对话,这个故事是这样的,一个病人去看医生.2.但是为什么我感觉这么冷呢
那个要a的
第一个故事是关于一段医生与病人之间的对话这样翻译：The first story is about a comunication between a doctor and a patient 你句首没加the不对,还有谈话的词性错误.
为什么感觉这么冷 不需要用进行时 应该说But why do I feel so cold?

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