托福口语第一题 如下的这个段子大概能拿几分?对于一二题又有什么建议?One of the my favorite book is called A Brief History of Time,written by Stephen Hawking who is a physicist.Firstly,the book is informative.It shows every

托福口语第一题 如下的这个段子大概能拿几分?对于一二题又有什么建议?One of the my favorite book is called A Brief History of Time,written by Stephen Hawking who is a physicist.Firstly,the book is informative.It shows every
托福口语第一题 如下的这个段子大概能拿几分?对于一二题又有什么建议?
One of the my favorite book is called A Brief History of Time,written by Stephen Hawking who is a physicist.Firstly,the book is informative.It shows every important discovery,theory and expriment so I can aquire a comprehensive understanding of the development of physics.And the second reason is that after reading this book,I can communicate more with my physics teacher.

托福口语第一题 如下的这个段子大概能拿几分?对于一二题又有什么建议?One of the my favorite book is called A Brief History of Time,written by Stephen Hawking who is a physicist.Firstly,the book is informative.It shows every
这个是第一题,题目应该类似这样说的：
Descripe a book that you are interested in.
托福级别评分有这么几个等级：good,fair,limited,weak
你的答案我认为会介于limited和fair之间,到底得什么看运气.主要的问题很明显,
1.减少废话,增加具体的细节
很多话是赘述,说的难听点就是废话.比如你第一句里的,called,还有后面的who is ...这句话对美国人来说可以算半句废话了.时间简史一说就知道,而且你已经用史蒂芬霍金作为定语从句来解释这本书了.加上物理学家其实就是充字数.如果我说的难听了请原谅,也是事实.
2.一定要注重细节.这类的题目一般的结构就是1个主题句+3个理由.或者1个主题句+描述+2理由
你的主题句是：“One of the my favorite book is called A Brief History of Time,written by Stephen Hawking who is a physicist.“ 虽然你用定语从句描述了这本书,但是太简略,无细节,基本是评述,所以不能算做一个好的描述.接下来你的两个理由,结构上可以,但是太缺乏具体的细节.理由一定要突出对你来说particular,specific的地方来,让这个理由与众不同而且有价值.第一个理由还好,但是我觉得还是应该再充实.第二个理由明显有点太牵强了,你读了任何书都会有助于和你那门课的老师交流,这人人皆知的正常现象.
我建议的思路是：
如果用1主题句+3理由的思路：
我最喜欢的书是时间简史.
1.它是霍金教授与命运,病魔抗争的反映,年轻人读起他,获得得不仅是伟大的理论,而且还有一种对人生,未来的思索.
2.它图文并冒,把及其高深的理论用形象的图象和通俗的文字表现给大众,让我学到了很多表达方面的启示.
3.关于时间和空间关系的话题我十分感兴趣,这让我经常和除了我自己老师之外的其他老师,同学一起探讨,这让我交了更多爱好物理的朋友,培养得了社交能力.
英文版：
my favourite book is A Brief history of Time.
firstly,it reflects professor Hawking's fighting for his fate and illness.What it provides for people are not only physical knowledge,but also the thoughts of their attutides to study and life.
secondly,i can read so theoritical things easily because of a great illustration.I think it is a good wirting skill with a nice combination of text and graphic.I'm working for my graduation thesis and I try it a lot.
last but not least,i'm interested in the relationship between time and space,which offers me opportunity to communicate with not only professor and classmates in my own class but also many other scholars in my university.I enjoy this process and progress a lot.
如果用1主题句+描述+2理由
可以适当修改：
我最喜欢的一本书是时间简史,它是史蒂芬霍金教授与命运和病魔抗争的结晶,并对我目前的学习有很大的帮助.
1.同上面答案的2
2.同上面答案的3
总之,主题句要简洁明确,理由要有特点,具体,突出“独特”和“细节”.比如我说到的和命运的抗争,这是一个非常积极,有爱的理由,是心灵上的感触,而不是说我学到里物理这样空洞.再比如第二条里面,图文并茂的写作表达技巧,这一点是美国教育里面非常突出的一点,我在美国上学所以我非常了解这点.细节方面,如果要说一个点,就要说到位,不要感觉说和不说没区别的感觉,要说就说透,让人看到这是你真正有意义的一个理由而不是一句空话.
第二题也是同理,大多是agree or disagree a statement或者让你compare 1 and 2,或者3个东西让你选一个并说.结构上都是1主题句+2或3理由.重点和第一题一样：结构清晰,逻辑准确,突出细节.语句是否华丽绝对不重要,只要做到结构清晰,逻辑准确,突出细节,就算全是高中词汇照样得good!

3-3.5 第二个原因可以再加一句 让我学到更多。。。还有一句话总结一下吧。

3到3.5吧，不错 加油