Dear Jin Jing.Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself .Your greatest problem is that you lack self---confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at yo

Dear Jin Jing.Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself .Your greatest problem is that you lack self---confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at yo
Dear Jin Jing.Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself .Your greatest problem is that you lack self---confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next,trying taking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly.

Dear Jin Jing.Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all,believe in yourself .Your greatest problem is that you lack self---confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at yo
Dear Jin Jing.Your problem is (加上a) common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices(改为advice) can help you.First in (改为of)all,believe in yourself .Your greatest problem is that you lack self---confidence.The first thing you must do it (去掉it) is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud (改为louder)about your wish to make friends than any words.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him(them).Next,trying(改为try) taking with a student who is as shy as you or who share(改为shares) the same interest with you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless (改为If)anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possibly(改为possible).保证完全正确.你原文的第五行的take应该打为talk（trying taking这个位置.)就不改了你知道就可以了.

Dear Jin Jing. Your problem is common among middle school students'.Maybe the following advices can help you. First in all,believe in yourself . Your greatest problem is that you lack selfconfidence....

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Dear Jin Jing. Your problem is common among middle school students'.Maybe the following advices can help you. First in all,believe in yourself . Your greatest problem is that you lack selfconfidence.The first thing you must do is to smile with your classmates. One's smile speaks louder than any words . Your smile will show that you are friendly to him. Next, making friends with a student who is shy like you or having the same interest with you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies with him. And when anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence,you can make friends as many as possible.改好了，应该没问题了。

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Dear Jin Jing. Your problem is a common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advice can help you. First of all,believe in yourself . Your greatest problem is that you lack of self---co...

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Dear Jin Jing. Your problem is a common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advice can help you. First of all,believe in yourself . Your greatest problem is that you lack of self---confidence.The first thing you must do is to smile to your classmates. One smile speaks louder about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to them. Next,try talking with a student who is as shy as you or who shares the same interests with you. You can discuss your study with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies. Whenever anyone is in trouble,you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence,you can make as many friends as possible.

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Lz 不来点内容改什么啊！！
is a common one;
First of all;
lack of self--confidence;
The first thing you must do is to smile to your classmates;
speaks louder;
than any word;
friendly to them;
try taking;
who shares the same interests with you;
unless改if;
possible;