可以帮我看看这篇英语文章?When I met you in the summer,Took my heart beat sound.Long the skies are blue.Your heart could be turn on again.You art so innocent and you change my life so patiently.You turned it into something good and real.I

可以帮我看看这篇英语文章?When I met you in the summer,Took my heart beat sound.Long the skies are blue.Your heart could be turn on again.You art so innocent and you change my life so patiently.You turned it into something good and real.I
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When I met you in the summer,Took my heart beat sound.Long the skies are blue.Your heart could be turn on again.You art so innocent and you change my life so patiently.You turned it into something good and real.I feel just like I felt all my dreams.When we could see each other to confirm the dream is true.How I can show you that I blinded by your light.You are waiting for the wonderful sentence but I don’t know if my tongue’s able to speak.Your beauty is just blinding me.I find out I was lost in this way now.But it is not a bad thing,like sunbeams on a summer stream.I won’t give up because of heavy weather though they say we not strong enough to last forever.This peaceful undergo is sent by heaven.Sometimes I felt befuddlement and despair in my life,you are the guy who comfort me not to give up.You changed me a lot,now I can’t seem to know how to pay back.Just trust in me,I will be the man who will always give you help and stand by your side.
I have been always hoping to see you tomorrow,and every tomorrow.I let you borrow my heart.How about I’d be the last voice you hear at night for the rest of the night?The warm-look made me fill with power that you give me.What would I do without your sweet mouth?I’m spinning and so dizzy.Cause I know my heart had been break into you.I’m already out of my mind.Your curves,your edges and all you perfect imperfections all let me head over heels.You are my end and beginning.Even I lose in this game I still is the winner.Though the world is beating you down,I’m around through every mood.Now,cards on the table,we both showing hearts.Though it is a hard risk,I will never let the right guy run past me and let me regret how foolish things I did.
The cold world won’t hold you tonight.
The sunlight doesn’t know you are so tired.
The moonshine doesn’t care if you all alone.
But I do.
The success won’t understand how hard you had.
The tear doesn’t know you are so sad.
The road doesn’t care if coming home.
But I do.

可以帮我看看这篇英语文章?When I met you in the summer,Took my heart beat sound.Long the skies are blue.Your heart could be turn on again.You art so innocent and you change my life so patiently.You turned it into something good and real.I
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Do you know He Jiong? He is my favorite host .He was born in 1974 and I like him because he presides the "happy camp".he is not tall or short,he is medium height.And he is very thin.He is a singer,an...

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Do you know He Jiong? He is my favorite host .He was born in 1974 and I like him because he presides the "happy camp".he is not tall or short,he is medium height.And he is very thin.He is a singer,an actor and a host.I think he is very great.He is very popular.Do you like him?

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