帮我检查以下这个英语小短文有什么语法上错误的地方.Hello,Kayla,I have seem you post since a few minute ago.Amd I really want to make friends with you.Now,let me tell you something about me.My name is Mike ,and I am 15 years old.

帮我检查以下这个英语小短文有什么语法上错误的地方.Hello,Kayla,I have seem you post since a few minute ago.Amd I really want to make friends with you.Now,let me tell you something about me.My name is Mike ,and I am 15 years old.
帮我检查以下这个英语小短文有什么语法上错误的地方.
Hello,Kayla,
I have seem you post since a few minute ago.Amd I really want to make friends with you.Now,let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike ,and I am 15 years old.I like playing basketball and swimming .I think you're very interesting,so I want to make friend with you ,I hope you can accept me.
Your,
Mike

帮我检查以下这个英语小短文有什么语法上错误的地方.Hello,Kayla,I have seem you post since a few minute ago.Amd I really want to make friends with you.Now,let me tell you something about me.My name is Mike ,and I am 15 years old.
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Hello,Kayla,
I have read your post a few minutes ago.And I really want to make friends with you,because I think you're very interesting.Now,let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike ,and I am 15 years old.I like playing basketball and swimming.
I hope you can accept me.Thank you.I will wait for your answer.
Yours,
Mike

Hello, Kayla,
I read your post a few minutes ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about myself.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I ...

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Hello, Kayla,
I read your post a few minutes ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about myself.
My name is Mike , and I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to make friends with you , I hope you can agree with me.
Yours,
Mike

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Hello, Kayla,
I have seem you post since a few minute ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , I am 15 years old. ...

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Hello, Kayla,
I have seem you post since a few minute ago. Amd I really want to make friends with you. Now, let me tell you something about me.
My name is Mike , I am 15 years old. I like playing basketball and swimming . I think you're very interesting, so I want to be you friend, andI hope you can accept me.
Your
Mike

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