谁能帮助检查一下这篇英语作文有什么语法问题?Our Chinese have two thousandsyear’s history.And we have some traditional festivals.Such as Spring Festival,the Dragon Boat Festival,The national Day and The Mid-Autumn Festival.Today

谁能帮助检查一下这篇英语作文有什么语法问题?Our Chinese have two thousandsyear’s history.And we have some traditional festivals.Such as Spring Festival,the Dragon Boat Festival,The national Day and The Mid-Autumn Festival.Today
谁能帮助检查一下这篇英语作文有什么语法问题?
Our Chinese have two thousandsyear’s history.And we have some traditional festivals.Such as Spring Festival,the Dragon Boat Festival,The national Day and The Mid-Autumn Festival.
Today I will talk about one of themost important holidays for Chinese people.It is The Mid-Autumn Festival,usually celebrated in September or October.The students and some workers willget 3 day’s holiday.On this day,some people choose to travel with some goodfriends and some people will get together with families and have a nice meal.
Mid-Autumn Festival is my favourite festivalbecause in the evening,I can enjoy the full moon.The moonlight usually very bright,I can also eat delicious moon-cake.Some elder will tell the interesting storyto me about The Mid-Autumn Festival.
As a Chinese student,I think wehave the responsibility to protect our traditional custom and make it glorifyto the whole world.

谁能帮助检查一下这篇英语作文有什么语法问题?Our Chinese have two thousandsyear’s history.And we have some traditional festivals.Such as Spring Festival,the Dragon Boat Festival,The national Day and The Mid-Autumn Festival.Today
1 Our Chinese have a history of two thousand years
2 The national Day不是传统节日
3 for（to） Chinese people.
4 usually celebrated in September or October.改成fell on 15th day of 8th month in lunar calendar
6 it was classified as a public holiday,so The students and some workers willget 3 day’s holiday
5 in the evening,后面的改改吧.the bright moon hangs in the sky,明月高悬 family members reunite and enjoy the moon together 人们合家团聚,共赏明月
6 our traditional custom(S)