帮忙评点这篇英语作文,看看是否存在语法错误文章题目是“I have an appointment with English Supper League"This is my first time particpates in English Super League.Before then,I didn't know something about this.Then I surved the

帮忙评点这篇英语作文,看看是否存在语法错误文章题目是“I have an appointment with English Supper League"This is my first time particpates in English Super League.Before then,I didn't know something about this.Then I surved the
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文章题目是“I have an appointment with English Supper League"
This is my first time particpates in English Super League.Before then,I didn't know something about this.Then I surved the net and looked up the English Super League.I saw many photos.In photos,many children were preparing the competition very nervous.Everyone was lovely,and I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate the English Super League now.I think I will be happy like them.I will have an appointment with English Super League.

帮忙评点这篇英语作文,看看是否存在语法错误文章题目是“I have an appointment with English Supper League"This is my first time particpates in English Super League.Before then,I didn't know something about this.Then I surved the
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This is my first time (to particpate) in English Super League. Before then, I didn't know (anything) about this. Then I (searched on) the net and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos. In(these) photos, many children were preparing (for)the competition (nervously). Everyone was lovely, (but) I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate (in)the English Super League now. I think I will be (also) happy (as) them. I will have an appointment with English Super League.

This is my first time particpates（不加s） in （the） English Super League. Before then, I didn't know something（改为anything） about this. Then I surved the net（made an online-survey） and looked up the Englis...

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This is my first time particpates（不加s） in （the） English Super League. Before then, I didn't know something（改为anything） about this. Then I surved the net（made an online-survey） and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos. In （those） photos, many children were preparing the competition very nervous（加ly）. Everyone was lovely, and I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate （in） the English Super League now. I think I will be happy (just) like them. I will have an appointment with (the)English Super League.

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This is my first time (to particpate) in English Super League. Before then, I didn't know (anything) about this. Then I (searched on) the net and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos....

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This is my first time (to particpate) in English Super League. Before then, I didn't know (anything) about this. Then I (searched on) the net and looked up the English Super League. I saw many photos. In(these) photos, many children were preparing (for)the competition (nervously). Everyone was lovely, (but) I think they were very excited!
So I want to particpate (in)the English Super League now. I think I will be (also) happy (as) them. I will have an appointment with English Super League.

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