刚开始学英语,各位来修改一下我的日记,Today is the first day of learning English.The morning I went to the library to borrowed two books.The afternoon I stay at home reading.And now,I am writing diary.It's time to go to bed.Dear,good n

刚开始学英语,各位来修改一下我的日记,Today is the first day of learning English.The morning I went to the library to borrowed two books.The afternoon I stay at home reading.And now,I am writing diary.It's time to go to bed.Dear,good n
刚开始学英语,各位来修改一下我的日记,
Today is the first day of learning English.The morning I went to the library to borrowed two books.The afternoon I stay at home reading.And now,I am writing diary.
It's time to go to bed.
Dear,good night!

刚开始学英语,各位来修改一下我的日记,Today is the first day of learning English.The morning I went to the library to borrowed two books.The afternoon I stay at home reading.And now,I am writing diary.It's time to go to bed.Dear,good n
The morning I went to the library to borrowed two books.
改为》in the morning,i went to library to borrow two books,
The afternoon I stay at home reading
改为>>in the afternoon I stayed at home to read,
or in the afternoon I was reading at home

borrow stayed to read books

Today is the first day for me to learn english. In the morning I went to the library to borrowe two books. In the afternoon I stayed at home for reading. now, I am writing the diary,……

Today is the first day of learning English,In the morning I went tothe library to borrow two books. In the afternoon I stayed at home reading. And now,I am writing diary.
It's time to go to bed.
Dear, good night.

从语法上粗略看，in the morning, to borrow, in the afternoon,
i stay at home reading改为 i read at home 就行了， 如果一定要保留stay 要改为stayed

手机党，不好一句一句的改，复制了一下在原文上改的，自己对照着看吧 Today is my first day of learning English. This morning I went to the library to borrow two books. This afternoon I stayed at home , reading books. And now, I am writing a diary. It's time to go to bed. Dear, good night!

to borrowed 改为to borrow
I stay at home reading 改为 I was reading at home
writing diary改为 writing the diary
基本就这些问题了。不定式后面加动词原型。