求为雅思作文打分.题目为：商务和文化交流的利弊.Fierce debate over whether business and cultural contacts on a global scale have positive or negative influence in right on its way. I suppose, personally, the advantages overweigh t

求为雅思作文打分.题目为：商务和文化交流的利弊.Fierce debate over whether business and cultural contacts on a global scale have positive or negative influence in right on its way. I suppose, personally, the advantages overweigh t
求为雅思作文打分.题目为：商务和文化交流的利弊.
Fierce debate over whether business and cultural contacts on a global scale have positive or negative influence in right on its way. I suppose, personally, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages.
Both nations and the public can be beneficiaries of specific communication concerning business and culture. In terms of economy, it could make sense in boosting economic progress and societal productivity as business contacts widen mutual trade and cultural communication enhances development of cultural industry. Additionally, with increasingly improved living quality, as a consequence of flourish in both economy and culture, people tend to lead a life much more vivid and diverse than that of previous times. Furthermore, from a perspective on a global scale, intense contacts assist in erasing regional gap since technology which is state of art can be introduced into less developed countries in the process of global contacts, thereby stimulating societal solidarity and governmental stability.
Yet objectionable characteristics still co-exist with the above benefits. A majority of people claim that business and cultural globalization are likely to present disastrous harm to ethnical identity, given the fact that people, especially the youth, who lack particular cultural education and skill of judgment, tend to acquire foreign cultural knowledge intending to behave themselves in the future contacts. Methodologies, such as calling for attention to national customs, enhancing schooling etc. may well on the schedule of government.
Conclusions could be made that despite the adverse effects global contacts over trade and culture may afford, the communication benefits both society and government, whereas adequate and sufficient measures aiming at boosting cultural identity should be taken.

求为雅思作文打分.题目为：商务和文化交流的利弊.Fierce debate over whether business and cultural contacts on a global scale have positive or negative influence in right on its way. I suppose, personally, the advantages overweigh t
Fierce debate over whether business and cultural contacts on a global scale have positive or negative influence in right on its way.这句话没动词啊?是不是 is right on its way?
I suppose,personally,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages.已经说I suppose了,为什么还要加personally?
最好多举几个实例.
我对雅思不是太了解,（sat做得比较多.）就按sat的标准打4分吧（满分6分）.

如满分100，我打96、5

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激烈的争论是否在全球范围内的商业和文化交往，积极或消极的影响，其通行权。我想，个人的优点胜过缺点。 这两个国家和公众可以是具体的关于商业与文化传播的受益者。 在经济上，它可能使我们在推动经济进步和社会生产力，扩大相互贸易业务往来和文化交流加强了对文化产业发展意识。 此外，随着生活质量的日益提高，作为一个蓬勃发展的经济和文化两个后果，人们往往要过的生活变得更加生动，比以往倍多样。 此外，从全球范围来...

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激烈的争论是否在全球范围内的商业和文化交往，积极或消极的影响，其通行权。我想，个人的优点胜过缺点。 这两个国家和公众可以是具体的关于商业与文化传播的受益者。 在经济上，它可能使我们在推动经济进步和社会生产力，扩大相互贸易业务往来和文化交流加强了对文化产业发展意识。 此外，随着生活质量的日益提高，作为一个蓬勃发展的经济和文化两个后果，人们往往要过的生活变得更加生动，比以往倍多样。 此外，从全球范围来看，在激烈的接触协助清除技术的区域差距，因为这是艺术状态可分为不发达国家在全球推行的接触过程，从而促进社会的团结和政府的稳定。 然而，反对的特点依然并存上述好处。 大多数人声称，商业和文化全球化可能带来灾难性的危害民族的身份，鉴于市民，特别是青年，特别是谁缺乏文化教育和判断能力，往往有意收购外国文化知识的行为本身在未来的接触。 如呼吁重视民族习俗，提高等可能对政府的时间表教育方法。 可以作出结论的不利影响，尽管对全球贸易和文化交往可以负担得起的利益而充分的沟通和足够的措施，旨在促进文化认同对社会和政府，应采取..............
OK~ 5.5

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