帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,帮我看看语法吧,Today is Saturday,it’s raining and very cold.I have a friend,she’s Jenny.We at KFC and chat while we eat.At KFC,I saw a student.The student and his friend are having a birthday party.They

帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,帮我看看语法吧,Today is Saturday,it’s raining and very cold.I have a friend,she’s Jenny.We at KFC and chat while we eat.At KFC,I saw a student.The student and his friend are having a birthday party.They
帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,帮我看看语法吧,
Today is Saturday,it’s raining and very cold.I have a friend,she’s Jenny.We at KFC and chat while we eat.At KFC,I saw a student.The student and his friend are having a birthday party.They enjoyed it very much.Today,we also enjoyed it very much.

帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,帮我看看语法吧,Today is Saturday,it’s raining and very cold.I have a friend,she’s Jenny.We at KFC and chat while we eat.At KFC,I saw a student.The student and his friend are having a birthday party.They
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Today is Saturday,the weather is rainy and cold.I have a friend,she’s Jenny.We went to KFC and chated while we ate.At KFC,I saw a student.The student and his friend were having a birthday party.They enjoyed it very much.And we also had a good time today.

it is very rain and cold . she is jenny .we eat some food at KFC. At KFC,l see a classmate.
The classmate and his friend are have a party. enjoy后面用ourselves

We at KFC and chat while we eat.这句有问题。。。应是We eat KFC。。。。
They enjoyed it very much.Today, we also enjoyed it very much.两个 it 都错。
第一个应该为themselves.第二个应是ourselves....

Today is Saturday.It was rainy and cold.I have a friend whoes name is Jenny.we chated while we were eating at KFC.At there I saw a student who are having a birthday party with his friends recently.They enjoyed it very much.And today, we also enjoyed it very much

The day was Saturday, it was raining and very cold. My friend Jenny and I went to KFC. We chatted while we ate. Inside KFC, I saw a student. He and his friends were having a birthday party. They enjoyed themselves very much. We also enjoyed ourselves very much that day.