求英语帝检查这个句子对不对,.意思:人生最困难的不是努力,也不是奋斗,而是做出正确的选择life is not about being hardwork,diligence and the related struggles,but more about making the rightchoices

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求英语帝检查这个句子对不对,.意思:人生最困难的不是努力,也不是奋斗,而是做出正确的选择life is not about being hardwork,diligence and the related struggles,but more about making the rightchoices
求英语帝检查这个句子对不对,.意思:人生最困难的不是努力,也不是奋斗,而是做出正确的选择
life is not about being hardwork,diligence and the related struggles,but more about making the right
choices

求英语帝检查这个句子对不对,.意思:人生最困难的不是努力,也不是奋斗,而是做出正确的选择life is not about being hardwork,diligence and the related struggles,but more about making the rightchoices
我觉得你这个句子 life is not about 没有体现出 “人生最困难的” 这个意思·
你觉得这样说行吗?the most important part in life is not about working hard nor fighting,but is about making the right choices
我把你的句子前后都改成了动名词形式,觉得这样看起来更和谐点.

being 後面应当跟上形容词 hardworking, hardwork 有些怪异。其它都没有问题。祝您好运

The most difficult thing of life isn't trying hard (努力)neither diligenting(勤奋)but have a right selecting . 注意让句子越复杂越好,多用句型,前提是要有把握让句子正确,其次是字要写好,这对作文拿高分是很有决定性的 Best wish