帮忙检查看看语法错误You leave me a good impression,but so sorry that i cannot be your girlfriend even you want to give me an expensive present...If you did not married once,maybe I will accept you and ignore 10 years’ gap.

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帮忙检查看看语法错误You leave me a good impression,but so sorry that i cannot be your girlfriend even you want to give me an expensive present...If you did not married once,maybe I will accept you and ignore 10 years’ gap.
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You leave me a good impression,
but so sorry that i cannot be your girlfriend even you want to give me an expensive present...
If you did not married once,maybe I will accept you and ignore 10 years’ gap.

帮忙检查看看语法错误You leave me a good impression,but so sorry that i cannot be your girlfriend even you want to give me an expensive present...If you did not married once,maybe I will accept you and ignore 10 years’ gap.
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You have left (leave) me a good impression,
but so sorry,(that) I (i) cannot be your girlfriend even though (even) you want to give me an expensive present...
If you did not marry (married) once,maybe I would (will) accept you and ignore a ten year age (10 years〉) gap.

you left me a good impression
but i am sorry that i can not be your girlfriend even you are willing to spend money to buy me expensive gifts.
if this is not your second marriage, then I would accept you regardless of the 10 years-age gap.