focus the resource on improving people' life.有没有语法问题，如何改更好

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focus the resource on improving people' life.有没有语法问题，如何改更好
focus the resource on improving people' life.
有没有语法问题，如何改更好

focus the resource on improving people' life.有没有语法问题，如何改更好
focus the resource on improving people's life.
句子已经很好了,但 people 撇号后面要加 s（如上）
你可以考虑这样改使句子更精确、雅致：
focus resource deployment on improving people's life.
resource deployment
the deployment of resource
the use of resource
（资源调配）
比单单 resource 好,
另外
people's life
如果是指一个国家的人民
前面加冠词 the 比较正确：the people's life .

应该改成people's life，但其他我觉得不用改了，因为其实英文精简一点就很好了。
而且我觉得people前是不用加the的，因为你这句话并没有特制。。。

focus on
致力于
He focused his mind on his lessons.
他把心思集中在功课上。

我觉得可以这样使用focus ...on的搭配，但是最后的所有格，应是people's

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