姐姐,您好,您能帮我在改一篇考研英语小作文吗?姐姐,这是一篇12年英语2的小作文,麻烦您在有空时帮我改一改,受累!（如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来）Directions:Suppose you have found something wro

姐姐,您好,您能帮我在改一篇考研英语小作文吗?姐姐,这是一篇12年英语2的小作文,麻烦您在有空时帮我改一改,受累!（如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来）Directions:Suppose you have found something wro
姐姐,您好,您能帮我在改一篇考研英语小作文吗?
姐姐,这是一篇12年英语2的小作文,麻烦您在有空时帮我改一改,受累!（如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来）
Directions:
Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you brought from an online store the other day.Write an email to the customer service center to
1.make a complaint ,and
2.demand a prompt solution
Dear sir or madam,
I am a customer who regularly buy something from your online store,I am completely disappointed to find that the service you provide is far from satisfactory.
I am referring to this thing that I just bought an electronic dictionary from your online store last week,but there are some problems with it.Firstly,the dictionary is broken when I received it .Secondly ,the battery needs charging after only two hours of use.
Therefore,something must be done to solve the problems,because they bring me much trouble in my study.You can either compensate me at a reasonable price or alternatively send me a new machine by express mail.Lastly,please tell me which solution you prefer at you earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

姐姐,您好,您能帮我在改一篇考研英语小作文吗?姐姐,这是一篇12年英语2的小作文,麻烦您在有空时帮我改一改,受累!（如果有语法错误,麻烦您帮我指出来）Directions:Suppose you have found something wro
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a customer who regularly buys products from your online store,but to my disappointment,I find that the products you provide are far from satisfaction.
I am referring to the electronic dictionary that I just bought from your online store last week,there were some problems with it.Firstly,the dictionary had already broken when I received it .Secondly ,the battery needed to be charged after only two hours' use.
Therefore,something must be done to solve these problems,because they brought me much trouble in my study.You can either refund me my money in full or send me a new one by express.Please tell me which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience.I really appreciate all your assistance in this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

"satisfactory" in paragraph 1 should be changed into "satisfaction"

写的不错。