我的英语作文写得怎么样（我六年级水平）My Summer HolidayI had an amusing holiday.I have plenty of time to do many meaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English and math

我的英语作文写得怎么样（我六年级水平）My Summer HolidayI had an amusing holiday.I have plenty of time to do many meaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English and math
我的英语作文写得怎么样（我六年级水平）
My Summer Holiday
I had an amusing holiday.
I have plenty of time to do many meaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English and math skill.So I went to the Rainbow Training Centre.
Firstly,I went to the English class.There are many English teachers in the center.It is so kind of them to help me.I like them very much.One of the teachers is Mr.Goo.Mr.Goo wears a pair of glasses,a T-shirt and a pair of shorts.He spoke very well in the class.I had a deep impression with him.But it was a pity that another teacher took his place to teach us.
Luckily,I took my English homework to Mr.Goo and he perfected my English knowledge.Since then,I asked him some English questions everyday and we became good friends.I think he is the best teacher in the bottom of my heart.
In the last 7 days of the vocation,He teaches me math at my home every day.Thanks to his hard work and I feel better in my math now.
No pains,no gains.After trying my best,I had learnt how to fresh my English and math skill.

我的英语作文写得怎么样（我六年级水平）My Summer HolidayI had an amusing holiday.I have plenty of time to do many meaningful things.But I spent most of my holidays studying English and math,for I want to improve my English and math
you said you have an amusing holiday,but I never see any amusing event in your written composition.You tried to squeeze in phrases and words you learned but never know how to apply them properly in your sentences.If you are in primary six,I suggest you use simple words and short sentences.Make sure your sentences are clear and coherent.

很不错嘛，小朋友，英语学得不赖，继续努力！Good Luck!