批判郭敬明的作文要英语的中文的就别发了发了也不采纳要批判不要赞扬麻烦看清楚再回答

批判郭敬明的作文要英语的中文的就别发了发了也不采纳要批判不要赞扬麻烦看清楚再回答
批判郭敬明的作文
要英语的
中文的就别发了
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批判郭敬明的作文要英语的中文的就别发了发了也不采纳要批判不要赞扬麻烦看清楚再回答
First,read a nearly worship the mood.Now standing in another position,perhaps the overweight,but I still outspoken leeway.Former transgressions by the "copy" popular argument,but really cool,I just needed to explore
The HuanCheng countries,is the standing of the flower degrees overlooking the connotation,or Japanese spirit.
Believe not,mostly after 80 author guo jingming to have this in common,namely beautiful words,smooth writing under the circumstances,with ups and downs with the connotation of vague to mask.As I read,but not quite so much feeling,because once suffered center thought purposive connotation and composition of the formula into old.Contemporary writer is enjoyable,pursue perfection and guo jingming romance with the express feelings and is writing kung fu touches your soul to acme.But no profound cultural base support,even if it is only that writing is dreamy empty,wind will devote shrivel under washs practice.The road to the classic,not just the slabs with words.So,I'm reading the HuanCheng "guo jingming,use more deliberation,the way is rather than mesmerizing whole heart.As to also lost book itself to express meaning,and difficult to master the rhythm,heart readers love breathing.
I think someone would attack immediately,I say,pure the nothing bad,because it is moved,is true.It also once represented my idea,but more extensive contacts in the works,I guo jingming more feeling connotation of vague.And this,is not appear very brillant suspense and not need many unexpected ending will think.I think,even with lyric writing can make a contact person,two strings,but also have aesthetic fatigue.But only hold the center,worth deliberate time,can highlight the real magic of literature.These,can consider to guo jingming of reflection,I also took the duty.
Risked by saliva drowned dangerous,I make this criticism.Just hope when once again exposed to guo jingming,face,not only have the illustrious patroness of dazzle beautiful flowers,is more like the sunshine and the connotation of rain.The teacher comment on:
Just hope when once again to the new contact when the winds and guo jingming,not only have the illustrious patroness of dazzle beautiful flowers,is more like the sunshine and the connotation of rain.
From the Angle of hope -- gently forward guo jingming article problem.(JinGongFa)
初读郭敬明,有一种近乎膜拜的心情.而今站在另一立场上,批判或许言之过重,但我尚有直言的余地.前番所风行的“抄袭”论调我仅漠然置之,而真正所需探讨
的,是那伫立国幻城遥望几度花落的内涵,抑或言之曰精魂.
相信不单郭敬明,大多80后作家皆有此通病,即在优美的辞藻、流畅的行文与跌宕的情节下,难掩内涵的空泛与无力.作为读书不多的我,却颇有如许感触,实因为曾经饱受中心思想立意内涵等老套作文公式的灌输.当代作者是写意的,追求浪漫与完美,而郭敬明更是把抒发感受与触动心灵的功夫挥洒到了极致.只不过,没有深厚的文化基底支持,纵使文笔再强,亦仅是梦幻空花,风雨洗练下终会飘零无凭.通向经典的路,绝非只是用词藻铺砌而成的.所以,我在读郭敬明的《幻城》时,用得更多的方式是推敲,而非沉醉其中全心品味.想来也是因为只要书本身失去了所要表述的意义,就永难把握读者心的律动,爱的呼吸.
我想立刻会有人抨击我说,纯粹的兄弟之情也没什么不好,因为它就是感动,就是真情.这也曾经代表过我的想法,但是在更广泛地接触郭敬明的作品后,我更感觉到了内涵的空泛无力.与此一同出现的,便是不甚高明的悬念与不需多想即可预料的结局.我想,纵使文笔与抒情可以打造一部、两部触人心弦的作品,但审美亦有疲劳.而唯有把握时光的中心、值得推敲的思想,方可凸显出文学真正的魅力.这些,愿郭敬明能好好考虑多多反思,那我一家之言也算尽了本分了.
冒着被口水淹死的危险,我作此批判.只是希望当再一次接触到郭敬明时,扑面而来的,不仅有般的忧悒,花般的炫美,更有春雨般的内涵与阳光般的力量.老师点评：
只是希望当再一次接触到郭敬明新作时,扑面而来的,不仅有般的忧悒,花般的炫美,更有春雨般的内涵与阳光般的力量.
———从希望的角度委婉地提出了郭敬明文章的问题所在.（金功发）
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