They soon became popular with which their beautiful voice.这句话有语病么,如果有的话请帮我改下,写作文急用

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They soon became popular with which their beautiful voice.这句话有语病么,如果有的话请帮我改下,写作文急用
They soon became popular with which their beautiful voice.这句话有语病么,如果有的话请帮我改下,写作文急用

They soon became popular with which their beautiful voice.这句话有语病么,如果有的话请帮我改下,写作文急用
很显然which是多余的,which一般用在定语从句中,引导定语从句,但这句话没有先行词,也不是定语从句,就不需要which.
正确的句子应该是:
They soon became popular with their beautiful voice.
他们不久就凭借自己优美的嗓音而受到欢迎.

你是不是想表达:他们的声音很快成为流行啊?Their beautiful voices quickly became popular

不加which

去掉which或者将with which 改为beacause of

with which好像不能表示凭借,而且不通,个人觉得应该用by