短文改错,十处错误,改清楚点啊!I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a early age,we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the wash

短文改错,十处错误,改清楚点啊!I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a early age,we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the wash
短文改错,十处错误,改清楚点啊!
I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a early age,we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing,cleaning and shopping by us．However,we seldom felt lonely or helplessly．We enjoyed our happy life．At weekends,we would play basketball,swam in the pool or go for a picnic．We are lived in a big family．We treated each other brothers and sisters．If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies,the other student would help him out．It has been five years when we graduated,but those memories are as sweet as never before．

短文改错,十处错误,改清楚点啊!I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a early age,we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the wash
I still remember my middle school life in that small town．I am (was) then in a school for students from Tibet．As we all left home at a (an) early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life．We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us (ourselves)．However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly (helpless)．We enjoyed our happy life．At weekends, we would (去掉) play (played) basketball, swam in the pool or (and) go (went) for a picnic．We are (去掉) lived in a big family．We treated each other (加上like) brothers and sisters．If any one of us had any difficulty with his studies, the other student (students) would help him out．It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as never (ever) before．