He is not doing so good at his studies... 改这个句子的错He is not doing so good at his studies,yet I want to insist that I give it a try 改这个句子的错顺便做个句子分析...加分的 请不要改那么多...那还不如

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He is not doing so good at his studies... 改这个句子的错He is not doing so good at his studies,yet I want to insist that I give it a try 改这个句子的错顺便做个句子分析...加分的 请不要改那么多...那还不如
He is not doing so good at his studies... 改这个句子的错
He is not doing so good at his studies,yet I want to insist that I give it a try 改这个句子的错
顺便做个句子分析...加分的
请不要改那么多...那还不如缩句...

He is not doing so good at his studies... 改这个句子的错He is not doing so good at his studies,yet I want to insist that I give it a try 改这个句子的错顺便做个句子分析...加分的 请不要改那么多...那还不如
原文看着有点怪,如果你能把你想表达的意思说出来就好了.
前半句:
He is not doing well in his studies 或 He is not so good at his studies
后半句:
yet I insist to give it a try 或 yet I want to give it a try
不能用so that,否则改变了原文的转折语气.

He is not doing so good at his studies,that I want to insist that I give it a try
so....that的句型

he is not doing well in(或者he is not so good at)his studies, yet i want to insist(want to insist比较奇怪,不过没有语法错误)that i shall(只能说个人感觉加个shall比较好)give it a try.

把前半句改成:He is not good at his studies

He is not doing so well at his studies。