As a teenager,I remember Dad get home lately every night.He already had a great work and loved by his students.He took years to finish what he wanted.And now ,decades later,I see my self for him.I go to work throughout the week and then came the week

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As a teenager,I remember Dad get home lately every night.He already had a great work and loved by his students.He took years to finish what he wanted.And now ,decades later,I see my self for him.I go to work throughout the week and then came the week
As a teenager,I remember Dad get home lately every night.He already had a great work and loved by his students.He took years to finish what he wanted.And now ,decades later,I see my self for him.I go to work throughout the week and then came the weekend.I go to class for six hours on Sundy so I cab finish my degree where I started twenty years ago.It took me the long time to figure out that what I wanted.I want to do for student what my father did for them .In my opinion,my father is my real hero.

As a teenager,I remember Dad get home lately every night.He already had a great work and loved by his students.He took years to finish what he wanted.And now ,decades later,I see my self for him.I go to work throughout the week and then came the week
As a teenager,I remember Dad get home lately every night.get改为got lately 改为late
He already had a great work and loved by his students.loved 前加 was
He took years to finish what he wanted.And now ,decades later,I see my self for him.for改为as
I go to work throughout the week and then came the weekend.came改为come
I go to class for six hours on Sundy so I cab finish my degree where I started twenty years ago.
where 改为which
It took me the long time to figure out that what I wanted.the 改为a,删除that
I want to do for student what my father did for them .In my opinion,my father is my real hero.
student改为students

Dad→dad
get→got
lately→late
loved→was loved
took→spent
to finish→finishing
wanted→had wanted
I see my self for him.这句话不知道什么意思,是不是错了啊?
came the weekend还有这句,好像没有这种表达方式,不...

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Dad→dad
get→got
lately→late
loved→was loved
took→spent
to finish→finishing
wanted→had wanted
I see my self for him.这句话不知道什么意思,是不是错了啊?
came the weekend还有这句,好像没有这种表达方式,不知道你想表达啥意思
cab→can
where→which
the long time→a long time
去掉that(to figure out that)
do→do something(I want to do for student 这一句)
student→students

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As a teenager,I remembered Dad get home late every night.
He already had a great work and was loved by his students
I go to work throughout the week and then comes the weekend.
I go to...

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As a teenager,I remembered Dad get home late every night.
He already had a great work and was loved by his students
I go to work throughout the week and then comes the weekend.
I go to classes for six hours on Sundays so I can finish my degree which I started twenty years ago.
It took me a long time to figure out what I wanted.
I want to do something for the students just as what my father did for them .
以上是我改完的版本,只是修改了语法错误,增加了一些前面两位没有提到的改动。
但是,在我看来,有些句子这样写会更符合语言习惯:
1. He took years to finish what he wanted. 改为 It took him years to finished what he wanted to do.
2. I go to work throughout the week and then came the weekend. I go to class for six hours on Sundy so I cab finish my degree where I started twenty years ago.
改为:I go to work throughout the week and on weekends, I spend six hours having classes every Sunday, so that I'll be able to finish my degree which I started 20 years ago.

我给出的建议比较主观了,是根据我积累的语感进行的修改。你自取所需吧。

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