一篇英语短文,找语病并修改In my opinion,Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no warmth to do it,and not work very hard.But if I love this j

一篇英语短文,找语病并修改In my opinion,Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no warmth to do it,and not work very hard.But if I love this j
一篇英语短文,找语病并修改
In my opinion,Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no warmth to do it,and not work very hard.But if I love this job,even the job can't well paid,I can still enjoy the job and get more fun from this job.Without it ,the work will be too hard to get efficiency.

一篇英语短文,找语病并修改In my opinion,Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no warmth to do it,and not work very hard.But if I love this j
真的是一篇相当中式的文章.你说他错了吧,他语法又没错.但是这个说起来真的是太纠结了,错误不多,1.i will feel no warmth to do it不恰当,可改为no passion;
2.even the job can't well paid应改为even i can't be paid不是工作付钱,而是我被支付薪水
3.可改可不改,without it最好改成without that

In my opinion, Job Satisfaction is the most important factor for me to consider when I LOOK FOR a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no PASSION and will not work very hard. But ...

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In my opinion, Job Satisfaction is the most important factor for me to consider when I LOOK FOR a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no PASSION and will not work very hard. But if I love the job though it isn't well paid, I can still enjoy it and get fun from it. Therefore, it would be hard to do the job efficiently without job satisfaction.

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In my opinion, satisfaction is the most important factor to be considered when I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no enthusiasm to do it, and will not work ver...

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In my opinion, satisfaction is the most important factor to be considered when I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no enthusiasm to do it, and will not work very hard. But if I love it,even can't be well paid, I can still enjoy it and get more fun, without which the work will be too hard for me to get high efficiency.

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In my opinion, Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when（why） I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no warmth(warm) to do it, and(加will) not wo...

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In my opinion, Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when（why） I want to get a job.If I cannot get satisfaction from the job,I will feel no warmth(warm) to do it, and(加will) not work very hard. But if I love this job,even the job can't （加be）well paid, I can still enjoy the job and get more fun from this job. Without it ,the work will be too hard to get efficiency.

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In my opinion, Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when I want to get a job.If I am not satisfied with the job,I won't have any passion in doing it, and I won't work hard. But if...

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In my opinion, Job Satisfaction is the most important factor to consider when I want to get a job.If I am not satisfied with the job,I won't have any passion in doing it, and I won't work hard. But if I love this job,even I am not well paid, I can still enjoy the job and feel fun with this job. Without job satisfaction,the work will be too difficult to be done efficiently.
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