短文改错两篇 （10处错误）It's nice to accept your email.Now I'd like to tell you something about the Palace Museum.It cost 200.000 workers for 14 years to build it.It was finished in 1420.Like the largestmuseum,the Palace Museum held treas

短文改错两篇 （10处错误）It's nice to accept your email.Now I'd like to tell you something about the Palace Museum.It cost 200.000 workers for 14 years to build it.It was finished in 1420.Like the largestmuseum,the Palace Museum held treas
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It's nice to accept your email.Now I'd like to tell you something about the Palace Museum.It cost 200.000 workers for 14 years to build it.It was finished in 1420.Like the largestmuseum,the Palace Museum held treasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history.Ithas 9.999 rooms.The Chinese traditionally think 9 as a luck number.To our joy,we Chinesestudents can now visit it in group freely of charge every uesday.I hope that you can cometo China or take a look at this museum by your own eyes
It can be seen,more and more people own mobile phones in China now,At the end of 2002,there were 20 millions mobile phone users.By 2005 a number reached up t0 30 million.People'vefound mobile phones convenience.They can get in toucb with each other whenever or whereverthey like.There're different functions to meeting different needs,such as surf the JntemetHowever,it may bring us some trouble.For an example,the radiation from the phone may doharm our health.In spite ofthis,the number ofpeople having mobile phones are increasingsteadily.

短文改错两篇 （10处错误）It's nice to accept your email.Now I'd like to tell you something about the Palace Museum.It cost 200.000 workers for 14 years to build it.It was finished in 1420.Like the largestmuseum,the Palace Museum held treas
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It's nice to (accept改成receive) your email. Now I'd like to tell you something about the Palace Museum. It (cost改成took) 200.000 workers (去掉for) 14 years to build it. It was finished in 1420. (Like改成As) the largest museum, the Palace Museum (held改成holds) treasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history. It has 9.999 rooms. The Chinese traditionally think 9 as a (luck改成lucky) number. To our joy, we Chinese students can now visit it in (group改成groups) (freely改成free) of charge every Tuesday. I hope that you can come to China (or改成and) take a look at this museum (by改成with) your own eyes
(It改成As) can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now, At the end of 2002, there were 20 (millions改成million) mobile phone users. By 2005 (a改成the) number reached up to 30 million. People've found mobile phones (convenience改成convenient 或 在convenience前面加上of). They can get in touch with each other whenever (or改成and) wherever they like. There're different functions to (meeting改成meet) different needs, such as (surf改成surfing) the Intemet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For (去掉an) example, the radiation from the phone may do harm (加入to) our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones (are改成is) increasing steadily.