英语自我介绍作文,求指出错误Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted three years.I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I m starting a new chapter here now.I m an out going person.people can easily communicate with me and I love mak

英语自我介绍作文,求指出错误Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted three years.I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I m starting a new chapter here now.I m an out going person.people can easily communicate with me and I love mak
英语自我介绍作文,求指出错误
Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted three years.I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I m starting a new chapter here now.
I m an out going person.people can easily communicate with me and I love making friends.Also I m delight to lend a hand when you need help.
I have a lot of hobbies.But personally,I do like to play video games best.The school work was under pressure when I was in middle school.And play video games during the right time could make me relax
During the middle school I ve been very found of English ever since.I m enjoy watching all sorts of foreign TV series.I think it would be helpful for me to learn English better.
Have faith and goal for good.That s my key to the problems.The course in high school might be even harder,but I believe I m capable to handle them.As the saying goes:Where there is a will,there s a way.
Thanks for your attention.

英语自我介绍作文,求指出错误Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted three years.I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I m starting a new chapter here now.I m an out going person.people can easily communicate with me and I love mak
把 a battle which lasted 删去 ,chapter 改成 life ,lend 改成 give ,把 The school work 改成 I ,play改成 playing ,During the middle school I ve been very found of English ever since 这句话我没明白你想表达啥意思,enjoy 改成 enjoying

第一段 lasted for ；
第二段 I like to make friends and talk with others
第三段 school work is heavy, and play vadio games during......去掉and,play---playing
could relax me
第四段 during...

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第一段 lasted for ；
第二段 I like to make friends and talk with others
第三段 school work is heavy, and play vadio games during......去掉and,play---playing
could relax me
第四段 during the time in the middle school； 去掉 ever since I enjoy ， 去掉m
have faith and goal for good, that ......不懂你想表达什么。

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Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted three years（1、标点符号，改为,）I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I' m starting a new chapter here now.
I'm an outgoing person,so people can communi...

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Hello.My name is .After a battle which lasted three years（1、标点符号，改为,）I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I' m starting a new chapter here now.
I'm an outgoing person,so people can communicate with me easily and I love making friends.Also I'm delighted(2、加ed变为adj.) to lend a hand（可以使用do sb. a favor） when you need help.
I have a lot of hobbies.But personally,I do like to play video games best. The school work was a big pressure(3、加个冠词，抽象名词具体化；under pressure，有压力，处于压力之下，用在此处不合适) when I was in middle school.And play（4、改为playing，动名词短语作主语） video games during the right time could make me relax（5、relax加ed变为adj.使...放松）
During the middle school， I‘ve been very found （6、found改为fond（喜欢的意思，为adj.）found为find的过去分词，意为发现，找到）of English ever since.I m（7、am去掉） enjoy watching all sorts of foreign TV series.I think it would be helpful for me to learn English better.
(Have faith and goal for good. That s my key to the problems.此处两句话很突兀，建议删掉)The course in high school might be even harder,but I believe I m capable(8、注意时态) to handle them.As the saying goes:Where there is a will,there s a way.
Thanks for your attention.
总体来说，还是可以的；稍作修改的：
Hello，everyone. It's a great honour to stand here to introduce myself to you.
My name is .After a battle which lasted three years, I graduated from NO.1 Middle School and I' m starting a new chapter with all
of you here now.
I'm an outgoing person,and I love making friends,so you will find soon communicating with me is very easy and pleasant. Also I'm delighted to lend a hand when you need help.
I have a lot of hobbies.But personally,I do like to play video games best. Because the school work was a big pressure when I was in middle school,and playing proper quantities of video games during the right time could make me relaxed.
During the middle school， I‘ve been very fond of English ever since.I enjoy watching all sorts of foreign TV series.I think it would be helpful for me to learn English better.
The courses in high school might be even harder,but I believe I will be capable to handle them.As the saying goes:Where there is a will,there s a way. May we study well and get on well with each other and everything in the new environment!
Thanks for your attention.

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