英语日记请求改错：A appetizing supperWe left off work earlier than usual these days,beacause The songkran festival day is round the corner,and we will have a holiday of five days.Today,We went straight a supermarket after we left office,we b

英语日记请求改错：A appetizing supperWe left off work earlier than usual these days,beacause The songkran festival day is round the corner,and we will have a holiday of five days.Today,We went straight a supermarket after we left office,we b
英语日记请求改错：A appetizing supper
We left off work earlier than usual these days,beacause The songkran festival day is round the corner,and we will have a holiday of five days.Today,We went straight a supermarket after we left office,we bought some vegetable and chicken for supper,what’s more,we bought a bag noodle.We have lunch and supper in restaurant as uaual,but sometime we cook ourselves.
I cooked two dishes today.one is chicken fried with fresh pepper,the other is noodle with egg.We were three together share supper.My colleagues said the taste is good.My kitchen skill is becoming better and better.It is to enjoy life cook to me.

英语日记请求改错：A appetizing supperWe left off work earlier than usual these days,beacause The songkran festival day is round the corner,and we will have a holiday of five days.Today,We went straight a supermarket after we left office,we b
改后：We get off work earlier than usual these days,because the Songkran Festival is coming,and we will have a five- day holiday .Today,We went straight to the supermarket after we left office,we bought some vegetable and chicken for dinner,what’s more,we bought a bag of noodle.We have lunch and dinner in the restaurant usually,but sometimes we also cook by ourselves.I cooked two dishes today.One was fried chicken with fresh pepper,the other was noodle with eggs.We three shared our dinner together.My colleagues said the taste is great.My cooking skill is becoming better and better.I enjoy cooking just like I enjoy my life.
具体如下：
We get（下班get off好一些,现在时好一些） off work earlier than usual these days,because（拼错） the Songkran（大写） Festival /Day(选一个就行) is coming/round the corner（感觉coming更简洁）,and we will have a holiday of five days.Today,We went straight to（加介词）a supermarket after we left office,we bought some vegetable and chicken for dinner/supper（选其一,dinner较常用） what’s more,we bought a bag of（介词）noodle.We had（过去式） lunch（ and dinner）去掉 in the（介词） restaurant as usual（拼错）,but sometimes（拼错） we cook by（介词）ourselves.（这里很奇怪,你前面说今天去买了晚饭的材料,然后又说像平常一样中饭晚饭都在饭店吃了,逻辑出现问题了,不如就把第二句中的 dinner去掉,后面就也通顺了/或者我猜你二句想说我们平时在饭店吃,那就改用 We have .usually.）
I cooked two dishes today.One was（时态） fried chicken（顺序颠倒）with fresh pepper,the other was（同上） noodle with eggs(复数).We（were去掉,语法错误,share是动词） three shared（过去式）our dinner together（顺序错误）.My colleagues said the taste is good/great.My cooking（ kitchen用错） skill is becoming better and better.It is to enjoy life cook to me.（最后一句你想说的中文意思是什么?改成我享受做饭就像享受我的人生I enjoy cooking just like I enjoy my life.）