作业帮帮我看看这段英文短文有米有错误There is an old saying “East and west,home is best.” So,we can see how important home is to everybody.I’ve got a sweet home because it is full of love.My dad loves me.He is kind .He usually watches O
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帮我看看这段英文短文有米有错误There is an old saying “East and west,home is best.” So,we can see how important home is to everybody.I’ve got a sweet home because it is full of love.My dad loves me.He is kind .He usually watches O
帮我看看这段英文短文有米有错误
There is an old saying “East and west,home is best.” So,we can see how important home is to everybody.I’ve got a sweet home because it is full of love.My dad loves me.He is kind .He usually watches Outlook English Magazine with me and answer my questions.My mom loves me,too.She is considerate .Every time when I play out and forget dinnertime,it is my mom who calls me back with her tender voice,“Come home,my little darling,dinner is ready”.
This is my home,my sweet home.
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He usually watches Outlook English Magazine with me and answer my questions.这句中的answer要改成answers吗？
帮我看看这段英文短文有米有错误There is an old saying “East and west,home is best.” So,we can see how important home is to everybody.I’ve got a sweet home because it is full of love.My dad loves me.He is kind .He usually watches O
第三行的watches应改为reads
第三行的answer改为answers.其他没什么大的毛病,写的不错
“watches”建议改为“reads”阅读；
"play out"改为"play outside"在外面玩
“Come home, my little darling. Dinner is ready”. 两个独立句
Every time when 可以用whenever替换，这样表达更简洁，更符合英语习惯。