【在线等】请帮忙检查语法错误 申请询问信Dear sir or madam,I am a student from China and I During my undergraduate studies,I have studied such subjects as calculus,linear algebra,probability theory,statistics,microeconomics,macroecon

【在线等】请帮忙检查语法错误 申请询问信Dear sir or madam,I am a student from China and I During my undergraduate studies,I have studied such subjects as calculus,linear algebra,probability theory,statistics,microeconomics,macroecon
【在线等】请帮忙检查语法错误 申请询问信
Dear sir or madam,
I am a student from China and I During my undergraduate studies,I have studied such subjects as calculus,linear algebra,probability theory,statistics,microeconomics,macroeconomics,portfolio investment,financial markets,commercial banking,international trade theory and practice,international settlement,financial management,financial accounting and management accounting etc.May I know if I am qualified to apply for the Master's Degree in Finance I would be grateful if you could also inform me of the tuition fee for per year of the Master's Degree in Finance.And which language I have to submit results and what is the specific requirements?
格式语法什么的 口吻越客气越好,

【在线等】请帮忙检查语法错误 申请询问信Dear sir or madam,I am a student from China and I During my undergraduate studies,I have studied such subjects as calculus,linear algebra,probability theory,statistics,microeconomics,macroecon
Dear sir or madam,
I am a student from China and I'm now an undergraduate student, I have studied subjects such as calculus, linear algebra, probability theory, statistics, microeconomics, macroeconomics, portfolio investment, financial markets, commercial banking, international trade theory and practice, international settlement, financial management, financial accounting and management accounting etc.
May I know if I am qualified to apply for the Master's Degree in Finance ? I would be grateful if you could also inform me the tuition fee for (per year of) the Master's Degree in Finance.And which language I have to submit the results and what is the specific requirements?

per year of 在这里很别扭,但我不太确定

你这个不是太客气啊，上来就罗列课程名称。
先介绍一下自己吧，哪个学校的，学什么专业的。然后表达想去读书，问他可不可以。再列你的课程。

I am an undergraduate from China, my major is (填写上你的专业), the main subjects I have learnt are … …（填写上你"主要"学习的那些科目,不要全都写上，一行足矣，现在的有点多，注意宏观和微观经济学一定不要写成西方经济学，外企很厌恶这点）.May I know if I have the opportunity ...

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I am an undergraduate from China, my major is (填写上你的专业), the main subjects I have learnt are … …（填写上你"主要"学习的那些科目,不要全都写上，一行足矣，现在的有点多，注意宏观和微观经济学一定不要写成西方经济学，外企很厌恶这点）.May I know if I have the opportunity to apply for the Master's Degree in Finance(in your school)? I would be grateful if you could also inform me of the tuition fee for the course per year. And are there some other requiremants, for example in the language or else?
仅作为参考，祝你好运！

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